deep pain ((Flo))

[Rosaliz Hernandez G6]

Rosaliz looked pretty natural, not to spiffed up, but tonight she looked terrible. Like she literally been through hell. She had a pounding headache and lingering nausea. Her face was as white as a sheet of paper. She felt cold and miserable. She hadn't gone to the feast which had been a couple hours ago. But it didn't matter now. She stepped outside. She had been whipped by a cold icy wind alond with icy raindrops pinging against her face. She walked on the wet grass. Her mind kept playing the scene over and over again. Thinking about it sent a shiver down her spine. Her eyes crossed in the painful memory. She stood there and letted the rain roll down her neck and shoulder. Quietly she began to cry leaning, on a tree trunk with her eyes closed against the splashing water. She felt as if her mind had been bleeding with pain and her body felt she had fallen on rocks, again and again, and again.

Abruptly her knees finally gave away and fell sitting on the cold, wet grass. Her breath felt cold and was caught in her throat. Her hands were shaking. Sobs kept erupbting deep within her. It just grew to be much of her emotions. They were spilling. It grew to much. She just couldn't take it anymore. She then rested her head on her knees. The pain in her head had been really terrible. Without ay controll she dropped like a dead thing on the ground falling form her sitting postion. Where she layed one of her hands were clutched to her clothes and the other at her hair. She layed there and sobbed.Feeling the cold wet rain patter against her skin.

[Flo Murvac H4]

Flo happily ate her dinner. Hot yummy spaghetti on a freezing cold night. Flo couldn't complain. It was her favorite food after all. She finished her dinner, almost stuffed. She really liked her spaghetti. After the feast was over, Flo's stomach had settled after her dinner and Flo was ready to sit down and do nothing. She walked to the Hufflepuff common room and sat down in the huge armchair. She crossed her legs and stared out the window. Suddenly she saw someone cross the grounds. Curious Flo walked over and stood at the window. Why would someone be walking outside in the freezing rain? Flo would sometime stay out side when it was raining, but only in the day, and when it was a lite shower, and the sun was still out. But not at night, with the piercing rain hitting your face.

Flo watched the person, although she was feeling like she was spying on someone. She was about to turn away when suddenly she saw the person fall to the ground. Flo looked closer. It looked like a girl. Either that, or a a boy with really long hair. At first the girl was crouching, but now the girl had collapsed and was now lying on the ground. Flo had had enough. She didn't want to watch this girl, who looked like she was in pain, and not do anything. She might be hurt. Flo quickly turned around and raced out of the portrait door. She quickly rushed through the doors heading outside, and looked around, seeing if the girl was still there.

Finally, Flo spotted her, and ran over, the rain hitting her face like little stones. Her hands were already numb, for only being outside for a few seconds. She Finally reached the girl. Gasping for breath, Flo yelled over the the rain to the girl. "Are you ok?" She then caught a sight of the girl's face. Flo's face turned to shock as she soon realised that it was Rosaliz. "Rosaliz! Whats wrong?" Flo crouched down to the ground and looked at Rosaliz's face. She was white as a sheet, and she was crying. "Rosaliz, your going to freeze!" Flo put her arm around her friend and pulled her up, so she was sitting. "Rosaliz, whats wrong?" She asked again.

[Rosaliz Hernandez G6]

Rosaliz heared the wind blow in her ears. The could rain splatted on her face. She laid there crying feeling the the cold tears roll down her face. She then heared a voice calling her in the distance. What was it? Well she didn't really pay attention to it. She herself had been in shock. Rosaliz heared a voice asking her if she was all right while feeling half of her weight lift from the ground. Flo had asked again what was wrong.

Rosaliz shivered almost nearly to freezing. She wanted to answer but when she was about to she had the painful flashback. This made her even sob harder. Rosaliz took a beep breath and thought 'tell her what happened. Everything will be allright.' So she moved her mouth but no words came out. How can this be? She had been in terrible shock that she couldn't talk!!!!! How would Flo know? Rosaliz sobbed even harder. She looked at Flo helplessly. But could she notice that she couldn't talk or how to get better? Could Madam Pomfrey help with this or naturally her voice would never come back?

[Flo Murvac H4]

Flo frowned and looked at her friend. She was starting to get worried. She knew that Rosaliz had had some troubles with Monica earlier in the year, but that hadn't happened in a while...unless it had, and Rosaliz hadn't told Flo. "Rosaliz? Can't you talk?" Flo asked worridly as her friend tried to speak but not a word came out. "Rosaliz, Its freezing! Why are you here? Please tell me." She asked the shivering shape on the ground. Flo looked around to see if anybody else was there, so maybe they could help her. Flo didn't know what to do. Biting her lip, Flo thought she should give rosaliz her coat at least. She took off hers and put it around Rosaliz. She didn't care if she was going to be cold herself, her friend was obviously hurt!

She looked at her friends face. It was all pale and her eyes puffy from crying. "Rosaliz? Please? Are you ok?" Flo kept asking her. She was still worried. She knew they would catch a cold, but right now, it didn't matter. Flo hugged Rosaliz and kept looking at her, seeing if she was going to talk.